Tuesday, March 04, 2008

You Know You're Obsessed With Writing When...

when you start mentally editing the ads on buses. Especially when you feel compelled to solicit opinions from the people sitting beside you.

I saw a transit ad for Colgate saying "If Dating Is A Game, Give Your Mouth The Home Field Advantage."

I think it would be stronger and punchier if the words "if" and "the" were cut: "Dating is a Game. Give Your Mouth Home Field Advantage."

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