when you start mentally editing the ads on buses. Especially when you feel compelled to solicit opinions from the people sitting beside you.
I saw a transit ad for Colgate saying "If Dating Is A Game, Give Your Mouth The Home Field Advantage."
I think it would be stronger and punchier if the words "if" and "the" were cut: "Dating is a Game. Give Your Mouth Home Field Advantage."
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